In my research paper I worry that my thesis statement isn't arguable. I need help either coming up with a new one or finding a way to make it work. As of right now I am not happy with my thesis statement and think that if I changed it, than my thesis would better reflect the articles that I found. I think I need to go back and change my works cited. I don't think I need help with fixing my works cited but I definitely need fix them.
I think gathering my information for this rough draft was easy but my organization wasn't good. My thoughts on my draft are that I need to change my approach on it. While writing the rough draft I felt lost almost as if I was just writing stuff down and not thinking about it. I think I made my introduction and conclusion a little repetitive and I also need to look at that. I can't think of anything else to say about the rough draft other than I need to change it a lot.
This reflection is thorough and helpful for me as your teacher. What about your work times and the other post, though?
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