Reno = skateshop owner
Reno- Hey welcome to Urban Nine.
Me- Hey how are you.
Reno- I’m good, are you looking for something in particular?
Me- Yes, I think I’m going to get a new skateboard deck.
Reno- Alright, cool. What kind did you have in mind?
Me- I think I’m going to get a REAL deck.
Reno- Which one do you want?
Me- I think I want the one with the zombie on it.(pointing
at the deck on the wall)
Reno- What size deck would you like?
Me- I would like to get an 8.25 inch deck.
Reno- Okay, is there anything else you want to pick up while
you’re here?
Me- Yes, I’d like to get the Pretty Sweet DVD.
Reno- Alright, cool. Your total is going to be $95.
Me- Okay here you go. (handing over the money)
Reno- Have a nice day. (handing over the deck and the DVD)
Pretty straightforward. I felt like the dialogue didn't hold very much emotional factor. I wasn't very intrigued, but I could see the movements and such as I was reading through the dialogue.
ReplyDeleteCody, this dialogue didn't use the rules for punctuating and formatting dialogue that we've been working on.
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